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In my town, this idea has actually been doing surprisingly well, which I’m really happy about. I still want to improve the design, though. I’m not a professional designer. I made the cards myself, and throughout the process I’ve been reading articles, learning about design, and trying to improve them as much as I can. So I’d really appreciate some honest feedback and suggestions from people who know more about design than I do. I’m mainly looking for ways to make the product look cleaner, more polished, and more professional. The language on the cards isn’t English, so that’s something to keep in mind when giving feedback. Also, the cards are made from paper, so I’m working within some physical limitations. I’m not looking for opinions on the business model — I know the idea works in my market. I’m specifically interested in improving the visual design and overall presentation of the product. Any constructive criticism or suggestions would be appreciated. Here are the logo, wordmark and the product. Im not a designer its not my job so please be nice, never thought i would say this on reddit post but in other design subreddits i have been doxxed for some poor designs, thanks in advance

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