Comment on The Pandora Directive by Steve Pitts

"While the first games had employed"

I believe that this sentence relates to 'Under a Killing Moon' only and thus should be 'game' and not 'games'.

"cut Chris Jones’s accountant’s heart to the quick"

I presume that this is intended to reference back to the fact that Chris was also CFO, but my immediate thought was rather, what has his accountant got to do with anything. Maybe it is fine as it is and just me misinterpreting.